Show! Don’t tell!

Two fifth grade students were able to share their ability to add details to an existing sentence to allow the story to come alive through details creating a vivid picture.    The first student had the sentence, “This room was a mess.”    Listen to how he made the language come alive.


The second student had the sentence, “The day was cold.”    Listen by clicking below to hear her expressive language.


Can’t you see the messy room and feel the temperature of that cold day?